Nearly all corporate and nonprofit communication sucks. And, I’m serious.
Almost everything I read (or skim) is not compelling, written for me (or to me), and impersonal.
Actually, try this fun experiment. Print off an “About Us” page from a Fortune 500 corporate website. Then, read it aloud to a colleague and ask your colleague to identify the company. In most cases, you could get 10 different answers from 10 different people. This is because the writing is so standard that it could apply to any company in that market segment.
Since you don’t have much time to research effective writing methods or spend hours online looking for great web copy, I’ve pasted two links below to great business writing. Both examples tell stories, are personal and are clear.
CEO from Nokia’s CEO to all employees: http://www.engadget.com/2011/02/08/nokia-ceo-stephen-elop-rallies-troops-in-brutally-honest-burnin/
Warren Buffett’s annual letter to shareholders: http://www.berkshirehathaway.com/letters/2009ltr.pdf
Please post a comment with other links to great corporate writing. Hopefully, more people will see “the light” after reading these great examples of effective business writing.
